Narrative

__ Friday 17th June __ This is what I edited on the Rimu story. Lila suddenly burst into tears giving me a big hug. “It'll be alright” I said as I gazed down the windy road, trying to hold back my own tears.

I also changed the spelling of Weat-Bix. It was originally weet-bix.

Alliteration

Animal Alliteration

Alliteration is when all the words start with the same sound.

Big bears biting berries

You try some:

Dirty dogs Dig in the dirt.

cats cooking carrots.

Five fish

snakes slithering.

Red rabbits _.

___ horses hauling hay.__

__Purple pandas__ __pictures.__

__Creepy__ ___ crawling.__

__Many mice__ ___.__

__Tired__ _ talking.

Green gorillas growl.

whales waiting in the water.

People Alliteration Alliteration is when all the words start with the same sound. Many moms making milkshakes

You try some: Tough teachers teach cooks cooking cakes. Thirty thieves __nurses napping.__ __Funny__ farming. Cheerful children __.__ ___ singers standing.__ ___ bankers buying bread.__ green girls giggling. Wet waiters ___.__ __Dozens of dads doing__. Hungry hunters __hunt__



Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a. pig 2. The candy was like__.__ all of the candy in the world mixed together __3. His hands were as big as____.__ his head __4. My little brother sounds like a__ __.__ gorilla __5. My room is as messy as__ __.__ pig sty __6. School is like__. torture 7. The chair was as hard as a __.__ rock __8. Her hair looked like__. blond silk 9. The monster’s breath was like. it hadn't brushed its teeth for a week 10. The water was as cold as. ice 11. My lunch tasted like. brussel sprouts 12. The rabbit was as soft as a cloud

Metaphors Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.

Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:

tall - dad is a giant kind - she was kind like an angel fast - he was like a kangaroo slow - she was slower than a turtle smart - fat - he was fatter than fat albert sneaky - angry - beautiful - ugly - she was uglier than Ugly Betty stubborn - short - thin - silly - scared easily - He is a giant. - She is an angle -

Thursday 9th June

This is our prior knowledge of Similes displayed as a wordle document It is comparing two things that are not alike, using the words like or as. Eg He was as big as a house Eg She was as slow as a snail Eg He was as quiet as a mouse

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document

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